This is a record of my learning from Pt England School through to Tamaki College.
Hi Faaao,Cool show not tell sentence about what a hot day it was. Maybe next time you could try make it a little bit better than it is now, that would be great, Anyway keep up the great work.From Taeshell
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Hi Faaao,
Cool show not tell sentence about what a hot day it was. Maybe next time you could try make it a little bit better than it is now, that would be great, Anyway keep up the great work.
From Taeshell
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